Like Music To Your Ears

r-avatarFunny thing about writing a story that contains a lot of music: sometimes that means you can’t have any music playing while you’re writing it. The right background music can be very helpful, might even be inspiring, but there’s also a potential for the music in the writing cave to clash with the music in the writing. Another danger is that whatever you happen to have on while working on a scene will influence the flavor or even the outcome of that passage.

In the music novel, and now in son-of-same, the goal is to put awesome music in readers’ heads. The conceit is that the band in the story is awesome, that they’re every reader’s favorite band, which, if you’ve ever talked about music with anyone, you can see would be impossible. So comparing the story’s music to any specific real-world bands is off the table. It would backfire at least as often as it worked, no matter which paragons of rock and roll we used as comps.

So, how then to put the magic music in anybody’s head? We use two techniques in combination (in harmony, one might say).

The first and most important thing is to lavish description on the feeling that the music creates, rather than just on the music itself. The proper device for this is the specific feels of a specific character. Showing the sadness Jackie feels when she hears the song is infinitely stronger than saying that it’s a sad song.

The second thing is, when describing the music itself, use metaphor and poetic license. Get across the energy of the sound. Try to describe it without naming any instruments, without using any musical jargon. Pretend you have no knowledge of how that torrent of sonic mayhem was created, you just know it’s a fire-breathing lizard dancing through a forest of giant mushrooms.

Advance readers of the music novel have universally said they want the albums, want to go to the concerts, despite the fact that their personal tastes are wildly different. Sounds like success to us!

6 comments

  1. Sarah M

    Now I’m really curious about what you guys listen to when you’re working. I’m imagining it’s all duets all the time ;)

  2. Kent
    Kent

    Not all the time, unless Dueling Banjos counts as a duet?

    We have excellent taste in music, naturally. But it’d probably work better to get into this in its own post.

    Thanks for the inspiration!

  3. Jen
    Jen

    I’m trying to think of any duets in our collection. Hmm.

    Nick Cave has a couple. And there’s PJ Harvey/Thom Yorke. Oh, and Don’t You Want Me, of course.

  4. Jen
    Jen

    Well if we’re going to count the Beatles…
    For some reason they don’t count as duets in my mind.

  5. Sarah M

    Fun! I’ve been listening to the Decemberists lately. I hope they’re on your list.

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