{"id":904,"date":"2013-01-18T10:16:42","date_gmt":"2013-01-18T15:16:42","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.skelleyverse.com\/?p=904"},"modified":"2013-12-31T12:27:53","modified_gmt":"2013-12-31T17:27:53","slug":"weasel-stomping-boots","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/weasel-stomping-boots\/","title":{"rendered":"Weasel Stomping Boots"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright  wp-image-41\" title=\"r-avatar\" src=\"http:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/06\/r-avatar.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"81\" height=\"81\" \/>We all have our particular words that we tend to overuse. When writing in tandem with a partner, the weasel-word list can be twice as large.<\/p>\n<p>In our partnership we have a system for keeping this issue under control. We have an actual list to work from and we use the software&#8217;s find function to track them down. Here&#8217;s the clever bit: we color-code them throughout the text so they jump out. That way we can skim through the manuscript watching for clumps. This is something we do together in real-time, so we can discuss whether to keep or stomp each weasel as we go. It would probably work out all right to divvy up the work, but we like the double-team approach for this particular aspect of the revision process.<\/p>\n<p>Most of our weasels are qualifiers &#8212; almost, just, seem, appear, etc. &#8212; but we also use our color-coding technique to help us spot passive voice and repetitive sentence structures. It&#8217;s a great way of prompting yourself to really see how you&#8217;re using words, encouraging an analytical reading mode rather than getting drawn into your own story or glazing over because it&#8217;s all so familiar.<\/p>\n<p>In our writing, and in work we review for our critique group, we have noticed a tendency to adopt pet words. These pets are generally not weasels (because who would want a pet weasel?), just regular words that get stuck in the writer&#8217;s head for whatever reason, and wind up on the page an inordinate number of times in a passage. BTW &#8211; &#8220;inordinate&#8221; was a pet word we encountered at one time.<\/p>\n<p>With a writing partner, you have two sets of\u00a0<span style=\"line-height: 24px;\">fingers creating <\/span>the pet words, but you also have two sets of\u00a0<span style=\"line-height: 24px;\">eyes and ears looking out for<\/span>\u00a0them. For us, that&#8217;s a beneficial trade-off.<\/p>\n<p>What herd of weasels do you have to wrangle? How do you go after them?<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>We all have our particular words that we tend to overuse. When writing in tandem with a partner, the weasel-word list can be twice as large. In our partnership we have a system for keeping this issue under control. We have an actual list to work from and we use the software&#8217;s find function to [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[322,326],"tags":[40,149],"class_list":["post-904","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-editing-revision","category-writing-as-a-team","tag-shoes","tag-weasel-word"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/904","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/4"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=904"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/904\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1773,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/904\/revisions\/1773"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=904"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=904"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=904"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}