{"id":776,"date":"2012-11-30T12:25:41","date_gmt":"2012-11-30T17:25:41","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.skelleyverse.com\/?p=776"},"modified":"2013-12-30T22:11:34","modified_gmt":"2013-12-31T03:11:34","slug":"the-plot-thickens","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/the-plot-thickens\/","title":{"rendered":"The Plot Thickens"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright  wp-image-41\" title=\"r-avatar\" src=\"http:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/06\/r-avatar.png\" alt=\"\" width=\"81\" height=\"81\" \/>Our walking conferences have continued (when the weather is suitable), and we spend most evenings camped out on the big leather sofa playing &#8220;what if.&#8221; The results are looking good. We have a plot that flows nicely from beginning, through the middle, and most of the way to the end.<\/p>\n<p>A problem we dealt with on our previous novel was the fear that we did not have enough plot, and we&#8217;re grappling with that again. Since the last novel&#8217;s first draft wound up at 150,000 words, we&#8217;re trying not to worry too much this time. Chances are we do have enough story.<\/p>\n<p>Once we talked through the arcs for all the characters, and sketched in their major actions, we switched from open-ended discussions to a more structured approach. Jen brought out the color-coded note pads (because Kent has a phobia about index cards) and assigned each character a color. Then she wrote out each character action, one per note, and Kent arranged them in a grid.<\/p>\n<p>Kent&#8217;s grid quickly outgrew the ottoman, and he had to move to the floor. The sprawling patchwork rainbow of paper squares made a nice visual representation of the plot.<\/p>\n<p>Each character had their own column, with the rows denoting the passage of time. Anytime characters interact, those actions go in the same row. This leaves blank areas when a character isn&#8217;t up to anything interesting, and it allowed us to see if we&#8217;re staying away from any story lines for too long.<\/p>\n<p>Switching to a different, visual mode of brainstorming is a great way to spot inconsistencies or other problems lurking in what you&#8217;ve already come up with. It also has a way of lighting up the creative faculties, which can accelerate things and open up new avenues to explore. It&#8217;s a go-to methodology for getting unstuck.<\/p>\n<p>We spent an evening studying the grid and making notes, and now we&#8217;re back to brainstorming to flesh out the thin spots.\u00a0We will probably cycle through the process another time or two before we&#8217;re ready to write up an actual outline.<\/p>\n<p>In a co-writing relationship it&#8217;s vital that the partners share an understanding of all aspects of plot and character so that they can write toward the same goal, seamlessly.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Our walking conferences have continued (when the weather is suitable), and we spend most evenings camped out on the big leather sofa playing &#8220;what if.&#8221; The results are looking good. We have a plot that flows nicely from beginning, through the middle, and most of the way to the end. A problem we dealt with [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[323],"tags":[288],"class_list":["post-776","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-plotting-outlines","tag-science-novel"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/776","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/4"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=776"}],"version-history":[{"count":8,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/776\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":785,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/776\/revisions\/785"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=776"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=776"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=776"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}