{"id":1553,"date":"2013-11-29T08:08:32","date_gmt":"2013-11-29T13:08:32","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.skelleyverse.com\/?p=1553"},"modified":"2013-12-30T22:39:00","modified_gmt":"2013-12-31T03:39:00","slug":"revisions-revisited","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/revisions-revisited\/","title":{"rendered":"Revisions, Revisited"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright  wp-image-41\" alt=\"r-avatar\" src=\"http:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-content\/uploads\/2012\/06\/r-avatar.png\" width=\"81\" height=\"81\" \/>Now that we&#8217;re done with our latest first draft, and mostly recovered from the bacchanal honoring that milestone, we&#8217;re getting set to make revisions on our previous novel. It&#8217;s also at the first-draft stage.<\/p>\n<p>We have a methodical approach to this, as we do for nearly everything. The first step is a read-through. We are making some notes and discussing the story along the way, but the primary goal right now is just to get to know the material again. It&#8217;s been &#8220;resting&#8221; for quite some time while we worked on other projects, which is a good thing. The time enables us to get some critical distance.<\/p>\n<p>The next step will be to paw through all the comment copies. Critique group feedback is invaluable, and we have a sizable heap of it. We&#8217;ll look for patterns, things that are raised by multiple readers. We&#8217;ll also indulge in a frightful amount of second-guessing and interpretation. Using what we learn from all this feedback, combined with our own to-do list generated during the read-through, we&#8217;ll move into planning the actual edits.<\/p>\n<p>In this case, we expect to need some substantial structure-level changes. Therefore, it&#8217;s even more important to be systematic in dealing with things. If our process has its steps in the wrong sequence, we&#8217;ll end up wasting effort on things that will only get cut later anyway, or worse yet, tangle ourselves up in inconsistencies.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;ll probably be a while before we reach a point where we can split things up. There&#8217;s a time for divide-and-conquer, and there&#8217;s a time for double-teaming the work. This is an example of the latter. Much like the very early stages of story development, we&#8217;ll be doing a lot of analysis and making decisions together about what is needed. It&#8217;s one of the most intense and rewarding aspects of writing with a partner.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Now that we&#8217;re done with our latest first draft, and mostly recovered from the bacchanal honoring that milestone, we&#8217;re getting set to make revisions on our previous novel. It&#8217;s also at the first-draft stage. We have a methodical approach to this, as we do for nearly everything. The first step is a read-through. We are [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":4,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[322],"tags":[97,289],"class_list":["post-1553","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-editing-revision","tag-critique","tag-music-novel"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1553","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/4"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1553"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1553\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1554,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1553\/revisions\/1554"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1553"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1553"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/runeskelley.com\/skelleyverse\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1553"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}